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Outline persuasive essay
Course: English Composition II (ENG123)
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Thesis statement:
The mental health of U.S. soldiers should be taken more seriously because veteran suicide rates are
climbing, alcohol and other substance involved overdose deaths are increasing, and the stigma around
mental health affects the decision to seek treatment,
I. The neglect of veterans’ mental health and the stigma around treatment for mental health is a
serious issue.
II. The suicide and addiction rates of veterans are climbing due to not seeking treatment or having
resources available to them.
a. “More than 2.7 million service members have been deployed in Iraq or Afghanistan-
some multiple times- since terrorists attacked the United States on September 11, 2001.
As a result, many veterans are struggling with physical and mental wounds, suicide,
addiction, and homelessness. (Susan Ladika, 2019)
i. The suicide rates among American veterans are much higher than among non-
veterans
ii. The rates for Vets rose steadily between 2005 and 2015- from 18.5 suicides
per 100,000 veterans to 26.3
iii. According to the VA, nearly 20 veterans died by suicide every day in 2017.
iv. The suicide rate is rising faster among veterans
v. There is an increase in suicide rates for veterans between the ages of 18 and
34- from 40 per 100,000 in 2015 to 45 per 100,000 in 2016- the highest suicide
rate of any age group
vi. About 20 percent said they had dealt with substance or alcohol abuse.
lll. Alcohol and other substance involved overdose deaths are increasing
i. Alcohol-involved overdose deaths are increasing and often occur with other substances
but have been minimally studied compared to other causes of overdose.
ii. Alcohol is the third leading preventable cause of mortality in the US, after tobacco use
and poor diet and exercise (Mokdad et al., 2004). More than 95,000 people die annually
due to alcohol-related causes and alcohol use disorder (AUD) is the most prevalent
substance use disorder, outnumbering all other substance use disorders combined other
than tobacco use disorder (Esser, 2020; Grant et al., 2016, 2015).
iii. similar to other overdose patterns in the US, alcohol-involved overdose, either alone or
in combination with other substances, is rising; in 2017, alcohol contributed to 12,954
overdose deaths in the US (White et al., 2020).
iv. Alcohol is a known respiratory depressant and has synergistic effects with opioids and
the risk of a fatal overdose is increased when these substances are used concurrently
(Fernandez et al., 2019)
v. Alcohol overdose occurs when BAC levels become so high that it impairs basic life
supporting functions, causing respiratory depression, reduced control of the gag reflex,
and decreased heart rate (National Institute on, 2021)
vi. To obtain alcohol overdose rates, annual cohorts of VHA Veterans were created each
year between 2012–2018 and overdose mortality rates were calculated per 100,000
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